:D purrrs verry nice. Even though it's a one shot, you had a few added elements that kept me thinking - what's the story here? because it looked like elements of a larger story that wasn't really necessary to the one shot and they just pick at my brain that way.
Other than those half wonderings, there is one thing that kind of confused me. It is one of those background type infos, but while the others were just there or apparent - I just don't understand this one.
"Sephiroth glanced at Tifa with something a lot like pity in his eyes, then he looked up at Cloud from where he knelt at his feet, and smiled in pure adoration.
That particular expression reminded Vincent so much of his lost love, Lucrecia, who’d looked at him that way for a brief time, and had looked at Hojo that way before then, that he didn’t want to spoil Sephiroth’s happiness."
??? I'm kinda lost on that... Otherwise, I liked it!
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Other than those half wonderings, there is one thing that kind of confused me. It is one of those background type infos, but while the others were just there or apparent - I just don't understand this one.
"Sephiroth glanced at Tifa with something a lot like pity in his eyes, then he looked up at Cloud from where he knelt at his feet, and smiled in pure adoration.
That particular expression reminded Vincent so much of his lost love, Lucrecia, who’d looked at him that way for a brief time, and had looked at Hojo that way before then, that he didn’t want to spoil Sephiroth’s happiness."
??? I'm kinda lost on that...
Otherwise, I liked it!