Alright I have to leave a comment on this, simply because I can understand your worry about the reviews... I am also a fic writer, though not of this fandom I usually stick to Yu Yu Hakusho and Band Fiction... but Two stories I have written had some reviews similar to the ones you explained getting. Both were rape fics... and one had a very violent review where I got bantered for putting someone's idol in a bad light, even after I swore to being a fan of the singer and that it was just for story purposes. I actually Liked the way you handled this chapter, especially the entire pissing bit and Cloud's reaction to it. If readers would focus more on the characters and their personalities instead of just the incident they would have seen your purposes like I did. I just thought I would leave the review and let you know that I enjoyed reading it and clearly saw what you hoped to come out of it. Keep up the great work. I look forward to your next update.
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Date: 2006-09-04 12:18 am (UTC)