Date: 2006-12-23 10:15 pm (UTC)
Squeeeeee~~~ ^____^ It was fantastic. I really liked how Cloud is been such a caring dom, making sure Seph is alright with everything, asking questions when he's not sure.

Oh, and I need to ask, why is Cloud so impatient with his fellow team-mates? I'm getting the feeling that Cloud is been more arrogant in a sense. Is it suppose to be happening?

I really like seeing Seph so ...vurnerable, I guess is the best word. He's opening up more and more to Cloud. We still know almost nothing about his experiences throughout his childhood, though you left a lot of hints, and I think that is really well done.

^^ Can't wait for the next chap.
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