ext_250025 ([identity profile] merlechan.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] jessara40k_lj 2007-06-04 02:56 pm (UTC)

Kuromirai here. ^__^

GAH!!!!! This must be another one of your best fics! *squeals*

[i]“Enough! I don’t want to hear any more of this.” Sephiroth sat back on his heels, watching Zack as he stood up and began pacing. “Gri’tal’la’eck’ti.” Sephiroth flinched at the control phrase, even as he felt himself come to attention, with a sharpening of his focus on Zack, ready to imprint on his next words. “You will not approach Cloud Strife as anything but a friend and a subordinate or suggest you would like a sexual relationship with him as long as I’m your handler. Do you understand me?”

“Yes Zack. I understand. Might I leave now sir?” He probably shouldn’t have addressed Zack that way, but the word just slipped out, while he was still shaken by the command.

“Y-yes, go on.” Zack sounded unhappy, but Sephiroth simply bowed slightly and left in silence. [/i]

This entire paragraph had left me in shivers. *been rereading* You've spoiled me for anything but Sephy-uke fics now. -__- ;;

Sorry I haven't been commenting lately. I'm sneaking peaks of your story at school and....*imagines teacher's reaction as she reads the page....*

Anyways, gtg. I'll post my entire love for you asap.

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