Thanks for the link to your Cloud Interlude posting. Poor Cloud, poor Brangwen. Thats just such a mechanical method of having sex. Not to even think of making love. So since you have already written about the next month's sexual encounter, and refered to the first month, you have basically already determined the plot and only need to flesh it out. They would actually be better off with a check list and script. If the Cetrans are more durable physically and have a higher sexual drive, can't they handle it better? Let Brangwen initiate sex, perhaps with her on top, and then let Cloud reciprocate with Brangwen in her prefered position. Cloud seems rather shy, and if his body is to react to the appropriate stimuli, perhaps someone else should take the initiative.
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Re: Expanding a bit more
Date: 2008-06-19 06:33 pm (UTC)They would actually be better off with a check list and script. If the Cetrans are more durable physically and have a higher sexual drive, can't they handle it better? Let Brangwen initiate sex, perhaps with her on top, and then let Cloud reciprocate with Brangwen in her prefered position. Cloud seems rather shy, and if his body is to react to the appropriate stimuli, perhaps someone else should take the initiative.