"It isn't exactly that, Cloud isn't shy about his sex life with anyone else, the issue is that their first time together goes bad, and Brangwen's first time with Elena, which she does want to tell me about is a direct response to that."
You could do a flashback from Brangwen's side of the first time when you write about the first time with Elena.
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Date: 2008-07-09 03:26 pm (UTC)You could do a flashback from Brangwen's side of the first time when you write about the first time with Elena.