I really enjoyed reading this though I feel bad for Brangwen and Cloud.
I don't feel as bad for Cloud as for Brangwen because this is mostly a result of Cloud being selfish, and I know how easily he could have made things better. All he would have had to do was say 'I don't feel comfortable trying for a child just yet. Can we just mess around this month?'
I am happy that Elena and Brangwen are happier now, though, and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.
Yes, Elena's finally got confirmation that she's wanted and Brangwen's got confirmation that a romantic fantasy she's had since the first time she danced the mariatha with Elena, and was able to anticipate her rmoves better than she should have been is true. (Basically legend has it that two people who can dance the mariatha like that are pretty close to being destined lovers)
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Date: 2008-08-09 09:07 am (UTC)I don't feel as bad for Cloud as for Brangwen because this is mostly a result of Cloud being selfish, and I know how easily he could have made things better. All he would have had to do was say 'I don't feel comfortable trying for a child just yet. Can we just mess around this month?'
I am happy that Elena and Brangwen are happier now, though, and I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.
Yes, Elena's finally got confirmation that she's wanted and Brangwen's got confirmation that a romantic fantasy she's had since the first time she danced the mariatha with Elena, and was able to anticipate her rmoves better than she should have been is true. (Basically legend has it that two people who can dance the mariatha like that are pretty close to being destined lovers)